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"What can I say? I've been following this story from pretty much near the beginning and I'm so very happy that you've finished it! Great lines, lots of humour - even in serious situations, which is something I love! - full of brilliant action, great vocabulary and everything flows together so perfectly! Overall a truly fabulous story - you are a marvellous author! Are you going to be writing a sequel? *hint hint* Please do! ; D"

Submitted to The Legend of the Dragon's Claw -- January 28, 2004

"Aw. That was nice. What I mean by that is that is left me feeling good inside when I finished reading it. It is very nicely written. And I feel like I can actually hear Dana talking. Thank you for the wonderful introspective piece."

Submitted to Selfish -- January 28, 2004

"I must admit at first I didnt think the story would work but then I said what the heck and read it. And I am glad I did, even though its a chickish story (and even being a girl I dislike them) this story captures Dana perfectly and it works well, keep up the good writing."

Submitted to Selfish - January 30, 2004

"WoW!! This fic is really, really good. I love the way you have captured MP feelings about Debbie into a single shot, and her inner thoughts were very well written. Very true to the character. Keep writing always."

Submitted to Valentine -- February 26, 2004

"This was a really nice piece, very in character for Saito and very perceptive. I loved the ending. That all seemed so true to Saito, still proud to be 'the wolf of Mibu' but also acknowledging the strength of his old nemesis. You really capture a subtle change in his viewpoint."

Submitted to True Strength --July 19, 2006

"absolutely beautiful! I'm just taken away by the marvelousness of your writing! It just has such meaning and beautiful descriptiveness to it. like describing Aoshi as constantly living in winter. and now he is turning around and allowing spring to come into his life. how sweet! quite good! I look forward to future stories of yours! Keep up the superb work!"

Submitted to Winter's End - July 19, 2006

"I came across Selfish first and thought 'Wow. An actual Terry and Dana fic! These things are rare as hell!' And after reading it I was surprised to see how well written it was. This follow up was perfect. I loved how you wrote it and portrayed the characters. I wish there was more to read. Awesome job! I hope to see more T/D stories."

Submitted to Homework - May 11, 2007

"Wow! This was written so well! Great job! I wish there were more Dana/Terry stories like yours. You portrayed the characters beautifully! I hate it when people exaggerates Dana into a whiny little girl. I like the idea that eventually Dana suspects something about Terry. Makes her look smarter than how they made her on the show. Especially when the didn't develop her character very well. You should write more D/T fics! I would LOVE to read them. :)"

Submitted to Selfish -May 4, 2007

"sorry that i haven't review for the last 14 chapters, but it was just too good, to let me pause. Right now, i'm struggling to type faster so that i could continue reading. I still have two chapters to read, and this is the best compound story i've ever seen, seriously. I've read other compunds, but they just don't seem to fit together with the titans...yet yours...it worked very well, and i really liked it."

Submitted to Firestorm - December 10, 2005

"Thank You, Thank You, THANK YOU! ^_^ I've been looking for this storyline for so long! Its the crossover that I have always wished for and I praise you for doing it so well! Its wicked and I would greatly appreciate it if you would continue it to the finish!"

Submitted to Firestorm - July 22, 2004

"I must say, this is perhaps one of -if not the- best Teen Titans story I have ever read here on Fanfiction.net. I love it because while the format is simplistic, the wording is very well constructed and it entices the reader to continue on through the chapters. There is the right amount of suspense mixed in with humor, which I think we all appreaciate at one time or another. I usually try to give constructive criticism, but in your case, I cannot find anything to point out other than this is a very well written story, and I look forward to reading the next chapters. So I leave you with this, well done."

Submitted to Firestorm - July 30, 2004

"WOW. Just...wow. I just read through your story in one sitting, and I'm impressed! I've read a lot of Teen Titans fanfiction, some good, many bad, but yours was the best so far! I'm sure you get enough people to give you ego boosts...but wow!
Spelling mistakes? None that I can recall. Attention to detail? Better than most, better than most. Proper depiction of characters? PERFECT. Dialogue? Wonderfully smooth. Was the story overall believable? Oh yes! . . . I'm beyond all those people who would wish you to rush for the next update. Instead, I ask that you take your time. YES! You heard me right. "TAKE YOUR TIME." Hehehee. Your work is wonderful the way it is (as I've said many times already), and I wouldn't want it to be spoiled by flames and rushing. I would also like to mention that you have a good sense of humor. There was many a time I spent falling out of my chair with laughter from your story. Thank you so much for that. ...although, I had to ask forgiveness from my dog... you see... the first time I fell, she broke my fall. Heh. I few of the giggles were no doubt because of my current 'condition', but none the less, it was very amusing. Thanks again."

Submitted to Firestorm - November 16, 2004

"I wasn't sure what to expect when I clicked the link, but I was happily surprised. I like how Riddick thinks of Jack and Kyra as being two separate people--they seemed like two very different characters to me when I watched the movies. I wish I could think of something better to say, but just know that you did very well, especially considering that you did it in less than 500 words. Kudos!"

Submitted to Seasons - March 20, 2006

"Wow, you convey the emotions so well in your writing, especially in that last chapter. It's almost like watching it unfold in front of me :) Although, I suppose it helps that I had some rather appropriate music playing in the background. Anyway, hope to see more of this soon."

Submitted to Anniversary - August 29, 2007

"What a beautiful story - I love the idea of Anakin coming back to visit his family, but this is honestly the first well-written story I've found that deals with this theme. All of the characters are totally in character, and there is a great balance of angst and humor. I can't say how many fics there are out there that go way overboard on the sentimentality, but you handled it completely realistically and meaningfully, without being sappy and mushy at all. Anakin's grief near the end, and Leia's realization of all he had been through, was especially well-portrayed. This is the best summation I have ever found of Anakin's fall. Really, really, really effective - it honestly gave me chills. So thank you for this wonderful story - I can't wait to read more of you stuff!"

Submitted to Anniversary - January 7, 2009

"Yo Amos, good to see another chapter up. As far as my subscribed Twilight stories go this is number one on my list. Jacob and Blade are perfect for each other. One of them is basically a sweet kid and the other is a total hard case. I love how you keep bringing up how blade is obsessed with sharp and deadly objects. It never gets old. But humor aside, the emotional turmoil and concern of the characters rings loud and clear. The humor servest to compliment and enhance the emotion rather than obscure it. . . . Like I said earlier, the two universes merge perfectly and give each other a richness and history that they didn't have before."

Submitted to Blood Trust - December 24, 2008

"This stuff is incredible. The level to which you develop Zoe and Renesmee's character is astounding. They're so different, they're the perfect match of characters. I loved how you developed Nessie's character. She's so innocent that I'm beside myself with grief for her. She's like a much nicer and more optimistic version of Edward. In short, she really feels like Edward and Bella's daughter. Zoe's character was no less amazing. Her description of her rocky relationship with Abby was just as moving as anything with Renesmee. This is perfect."

Submitted to Blood Trust - November 17, 2008

"Hoy mamma! This was a good chapter. Seriously, you don't update enough. The interaction between characters as good if not better than Stephanie meyer's faire."

Submitted to Blood Trust - November 8, 2008

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